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Bublix reminds me of spellcasters and magical things like Harry Potter...the outside is so normal sized,but then you enter there and there's basically everything inside it,like the space inside it is bigger than the outside hahaha


Seriously, I was like "excuse me,WTF!" The first time I come there in the food square haha


The story happens in Japan? I saw in some route Parker saying that they were near Harusu from Lagoon Lounge 🤔🤔

I tried looking at the sub characters page and that happened 


[code] I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While running game code: File "renpy/common/00gamemenu.rpy", line 173, in File "game/characters.rpy", line 250, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 250, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 341, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 343, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 344, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 346, in execute NameError: name 'namesub' is not defined -- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Full traceback: File "00gamemenu.rpyc", line 173, in script File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/ast.py", line 862, in execute renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/python.py", line 1912, in py_exec_bytecode exec bytecode in globals, locals File "renpy/common/00gamemenu.rpy", line 173, in File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/ui.py", line 287, in interact rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 2649, in interact repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 3033, in interact_core root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact()) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 511, in visit_all d.visit_all(callback) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 511, in visit_all d.visit_all(callback) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 511, in visit_all d.visit_all(callback) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 511, in visit_all d.visit_all(callback) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/screen.py", line 424, in visit_all callback(self) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/core.py", line 3033, in root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact()) File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/screen.py", line 434, in per_interact self.update() File "/data/user/0/com.andehpi.ac/files/renpy/display/screen.py", line 619, in update self.screen.function(**self.scope) File "game/characters.rpy", line 250, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 250, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 341, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 343, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 344, in execute File "game/characters.rpy", line 346, in execute File "", line 346, in NameError: name 'namesub' is not defined [/code] 

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What is that □?lol 


Woah,I didn't saw that reference to Lagoon Lounge the time I played the other routes hahaha. Nice :P

Oh,a recommendation to you: there is too much repetition sometimes...like "you did x and then you and...". If you want to make the people more immersed in the VN changing that helps greatly :D


Yeah,rest eyes after turning off the alarm is really dangerous...I lost the time a lot due to it at high school time 😑

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Hey Andy, since it said that it was updated 22 hours ago, who got updated

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Hi, can I ask something

What app did you use to draw the character Sprite?

Paint Tool SAI and Adobe Photoshop.

is there day 4 for Parker?

Patreon version, yes. Public demo, no.

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Lars is bae 😻

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speaking of Lars, haaaaaaaave you seen this yet >:P
https://twitter.com/andehp_/status/1107697878917484545 (NSFW 18+)
its official artwork too hehe

grrr, can't wait to see this happen :>

Nice.

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Cant wait for more Parker days :P

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Poor Lars. Hopefully things start looking up for him.

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I played it a bit and was interesting. Hope you do continue with the project. 


The arts were really good. It was you who made it? You said you started drawing recently,but the art looks like something of an experienced drawer 🤔 anyway,I liked the art. Good backgrounds. That map was interesting too,tough you probably needs to change it later,as it is like they live in a farm looking at the map hahaha.


Loved the art for...o forgot their names lol...Mr Stone? And...I think it was Gil... they're all cute,but I liked more the art of those two haha.


There are some errors in English and scene transitions,but you probably are correcting it.


I want to see how the story will develop ^-^I only think that start progress too fast...like in 1 day they're as intimate as if they knew one another for months...it is weird 



Good work anyway,and congratulations for all that was already achieved. I'll be waiting for more :D

Heya, it was me who did the art for this game, at least the sprites. The rest are found on the internet, with permission, ofc.

thanks for your kind words, I appreciate it!


As for day 1, there will be some backstory as the story progresses.

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I discovered this game looking around at itch.io...I started to play it like 3min ago and sees interesting ^-^ well,at least I liked the arts and loved the menu...that gallery of music's,images and characters was a very good idea. 


By the way,you made some sort of shared document in Google docs or something of the like to report bugs/typos? I found one typo with the English... day 1,when talking to the guy with glasses: "You could feel that everyone looking at you for a split second and then shifting back to Mr. Stone." (There is a "was" missing after "everyone")

English isn't my main idiom too and even tough I can communicate in English,I too make a lot of errors...english is a pain the ass to me 🤣 

Yeah, I made a google docs, but I'm deleting it for now. I'll add it back once I'm done fixing everthing.

And thanks for pointing it out, I'll discuss it with my editor! 


And same, oh boy, English is too hard for me; I'm trying, though.

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What was updated in 3.50? 

Anders' route

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I adore this game! Can't wait to see more of this :)

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I love this game <3 Can't wait to see more of Gill <3

Mee too dude, me too.

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I really love this game I loved the Anders update his exprrssions are just so adorable he definitely reminds me of Chester from Extracurricular Activies and that makes it even better can’t wait till the next update you guys keep up the great work Andy 😊😁

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When will there be new updates? Really loving the game.

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Public versions are released 30 days after the Patreons get it

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how do i fix this?

you can't because Lars Day 4 isn't available in public version, yet.

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i can´t wait to see more of gil`s route

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Mr Parker is the cutest thing in the world

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This game is prettygood so far. Keep up with the good work.

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one question how often do you update like is it monthly or do you just fling it out when you think its done not trying to rush you id rather you take your time its just i like to be "ready" in a sense btw the game so far is 10/10 cant wait to see what you come up with and if you like i wouldn't mind giving ideas for you to think over. But again im really loving the game so far keep up the amazing work

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The game is really cute!  I think Anders and Lars are my top 2 favs so far.  I did Anders route first and I gotta say, Mark is a bloody wanker.  Hahaha,  I don't even want to do his route now.

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I love Lars very much!And I want more!

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i think am having a problem when going inside app theirs a loading after loading poof i got out from the app i cannot anymore idk why

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i think am having a problem when going inside app theirs a loading after loading poof i got out from the app i cannot anymore idk why

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I loved the game! I followed Mark's route, and would very much like an update.

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I love coach Gil so much! awesome game

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Greetings!

I'm really enjoying the game so far (I haven't finished it yet), Mr. Parker is so damn cute!~ I can't handle it haha. I've been having an amazing experience with it, and I'm certainly going to do all of the possible routes. 

I'm not really sure why, but sometimes (it has happened 2 times, to be more specific) the ambient background  image won't load. An "image not found" error occurs, as shown below: 

It doesn't really affect the story's understanding but still, I want to see what Parker's house looks like xD. Maybe my download was somehow corrupted and some image files weren't downloaded? Could be, but I thought I should just share it with the developer.

Lastly, if you will to make your game worldwide known in the near future, let me know and I will gladly translate it to Brazilian Portuguese. Unfortunately this is the only language I master at the moment besides English, but I'm sure there are other people from all around the world that would love to help translating your game. 

Now I'll get going and finish my gameplay. Keep up the good work! ♥

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the errors happen because there's actually no files in the game. that's not corrupted files, i just haven't put it into the game yet.

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Hey Andy!
I am not a big fan of Visual Novels but I played some of them such as Extracurricular Activities,Morenatsu. etc..
So i was looking for a new visual novel and suddenly found your game and I must say it is one of the best visual novels i ever played!

This  game is better than any other games at least in my opinion! I didn't notice any english mistakes but it dosen't matter now , the stories were great, the graphics were great too.. i just love everything you done there.

I liked Coach Gil story the most ( maybe because i'm a coach myself lol), anyway it was good and funny, keep up your hard work!!!

Don't u ever think to cancel it!! I'm really looking forward to this game!! 
Please continue working on it, I would really appreciate if you will continue Gil's route, thank you so much for making this! :D


*if you ever need anything, my lil brother is a graphic designer he draws well and likes drawing bara characters.

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Hello there, thanks for the kind words, and don't worry, I'll keep working on it!

I'll keep it in mind about your lil brother, just in case I need help.

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This update is actually really good
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The Smiley face download is just a glitchy patreon version for me.

Also the file version is 6.6.6. i sense a coincidence

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Is there an update to get the latest or it just stop on gil. can you tell me how pls..(im ussing android)

why did my game stop on gil is there something wrong? If its not finish pls finish it and add another chapter cause i love the story plsssss.......

This is still a demo and not complete then?

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that was a nice update for Lars I enjoyed playing it and it was nice being able to see Lars shirtless that was very unexpected hopefully one day we can see more of the characters like that or even fully nude 😏 but  I thought it was funny and cool how you referenced Lagoon Lounge on Walter’s tv keep up the great work can’t wait to see which character will get the next update Andy I’ll be sure to keep and eye out when you put out a new update 🙂

do know why only on this game i have some background purple and green and some are normal  ? i search on internet and nothing help please

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I love Lars day 3 keep the good work going and don't think I didn't see you plug in another game in there  :) 

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Wow so amazing that story pls update un full story.

I done play day 2

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